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On a crowded
road,
I walked
aside;
They leapt
past me,
My existence
at hide;
And then
escaped a moan,
I am alone…
I got
worried,
With their turmoil and despair;
I extended
my hands to help,
But they cut
them in pair;
And then
cried the unfair loan,
I am alone…
I played the
game,
Snubbed
their rules wicked,
With my
rules of moral fame;
But I lost
and fell;
And then
pained my broken bone,
I am alone…
I fell in
love,
With a girl
my first;
But she
moved away,
Left my heart
to burst;
And then
screamed my heart sewn,
I am alone…
I don’t know,
How do I
feel;
I don’t know,
What’s in
the reel;
But then
says my mind blown,
I am alone…
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I can so feel this..I feel as if it is written about my life...a bond....As always...XOXOXOXO
nice... its good.. touched my heart.
Very very nice.. touching. I like the way you used the word 'sewn' to rhyme with alone.. :) Very few I have come across who know the correct pronunciation of sew. Impressed. Good job. :)
hey poet. Dont be sad sad. Be happy sad. :)
Lovely, I so recognize these emotions. touched my heart. <3<3<3 Jan
Deep down everyone is ALONE...beautifully expressed.
We all feel alone at times...Though the poem is little sad but the expression is lovely!
hmm v touchy..emo:
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very sad ... but never forget we are never alone
It may be bitter but true that we all are alone.' I'm alone ' is the different theme. I hope poet will get rid of his loneliness soon as someone alone is there waiting for him. Good expressed Gaurav Bhatt
Our greatest songs are those that tell of saddest thoughts, it's true. But I don't think, you are expected of such expressions in your twenties. Be jolly and bubbling like Kishore Kumar, and keep aside songs of Mukesh for the time being. As far as composition is concerned, it is beautiful as always. Words used are lucid and whole gamut of the creation is compact, I liked it.
Beautifully written, Anshul :)
really its awesum.....
Though well written, I feel that the poem could have done better because it did not live up to the expectation created in the beginning. The first stanza is touch of a brilliance.
anjane ho tum jo begane ho tumjo pahchane lagte ho kyutum gahri nindo me jab soye soye ho
to mujhme jagte ho kyu
jab tujhko pata hai dil muskurata haikya tujhse hai wastakya tujhme dhundu mai kya tujhse chahu maikya kya hai tujhme merajanu na mai tujhme mera kissa hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagajanu na mai tujhse mera rishta hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagatujhse taluk to nahi kuch merakyu tu lage hai apno sadekhu jo tujhko ek najar jaye bhar mujhme hai mera jo khyaljindagi me khushi tere aane se haiwarna jine me gum har bahane se haihai ye alag bat hai hum mile aaj haidil tujhe janta ek jamane se haijanu na mai tujhme mera rishta hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagajanu na mai tujhme mera rishta hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagaaankho ne aankho se kahi dastatumko banake raj dabaho me jannat aa gayi khusnumatum jo hue ho meharba jism se jism ka yu utaruf huaho gaye hum sanam ruh tak aasnaek sada jo chale do kadam sath memil gaya hai hame jindagi ka patajanu na mai tujhme mera rishta hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagajanu na mai tujhme mera rishta hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagaanjane ho tum jo begane ho tumjo pahchane lagte ho kyutum gahri nindo me jab soye soye ho
to mujhme jagte ho kyu
jab tujhko pata hai dil muskurata haikya tujhse hai wastakya tujhme dhundu mai kya tujhse chahu maikya kya hai tujhme merajanu na mai tujhme mera kissa hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu lagajanu na mai tujhse mera rishta hai kyao ajnabi apna mujhe tu laga
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